Other Girly ^^
naja das ist mal ein altes bild von mir das aus lw im unterricht (Schule halt) entstanden ist . Freu mich über kommentare und Tipps^^

Lg DAG
Danke fürs angucken ^^

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toonsUp Member - 30.04.11 07:48
Halllllooo,

das sieht ja schonmal gut aus!
Einen oder zwei Tipps hätte ich aber auch noch-

1.Die Striche sehen sehr sauber aus,bis an den Augen,da ist ein Wackler reingekommen,dass hat dich bei mir die Fünf***** gekostet.

2.Du hast den Hals in den Körper geschoben.Bei den meisten Cartoons setzt man die Köpfe auf einen kleinen Hals.
Schau dir das man an:http://www.toonsup.com/comics/sommer/taucher_sam_1_gefaehrlicher_professor-3?backlink=%2Flist%2Ftaucher_sam_5089%3FsearchId%3D70801
im vorletzteb Panel siehst du,wie man den Hals auf den Kopf setzt. Ob,Manga oder andere Stile

LG Max
 
 

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