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(created: 27.02.2008, uploaded: 27.02.08 01:49)
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| Pauer (toonsUp team) - 29.02.08 17:41
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Haha, ja stimmt. Muss ja nicht jeder Cartoon der Brüller schlechthin sein ...
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| Ron (toonsUp admin) - 28.02.08 11:33
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Also ich finde den Gag und die Zeichnung sehr gut.
@PaulErebus: Der Titel sagt ja auch: Ein lama gag
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| Pauer (toonsUp team) - 28.02.08 08:46
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Konstruktives ...
Naja, nicht allzu böse nehmen, aber ich kannte den Gag an der Sache nach 10 ms ohne Sprechblase zu lesen. Dann erschlafften meine Gesichtsmuskeln. Dazwischen blieb keine Zeit zum Lachen. Der Stil ist allerdings gut, aber sie müssen zugeben, die Pointe war etwas halbherzig
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| Volkertoons - 27.02.08 19:34
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@Kiste: Danke!
@Paul: Zeichnerisch? Vom Gag her? Oder weil man sich über religiöse Würdenträger nicht lustig macht? Oder alles zusammen? XD Konstruktive Kritik ist immer gut, wenn sie differenziert und nicht einfach nur allgemein ist ^.-
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| Pauer (toonsUp team) - 27.02.08 18:42
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hmm
Tschuldigung, aber der Cartoon ist ... mies
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| Kiste - 27.02.08 14:59
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Am meisten musste ich über den bedepperten Gesichtsausdruck der Lamas lachen... Haha, "mein Herr". Gut finde ich auch die Idee, das Ende des Satzes auszusparen. Schon fast tragisch- komisch, der Mönch hat schon verloren, bevor er richtig begonnen hat.
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