Comic akacya the bounty hunter page 103

shinka - akacya the bounty hunter page 103


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shinka      Half-time artist     Approach to criticism   Normal
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Pauer (toonsUp team) - 08.02.18 21:04
I see, so it's a staircase, going down in the background. I didn't check the previous pages.
shinka - 08.02.18 16:55
I understand your point of view I do admit some mistakes but...
The first panel...It's a staircase going down very fast, she's at the top entering the door, so she's flat in the opening but behind the staircase goes down in a curv too cause the homebase is round in shape too... weird shapes I know.
After, she's in the room she've just entered. If it helps

I'll try to make it better and easier to follow.
Pauer (toonsUp team) - 08.02.18 10:02
There are always very odd perspectives in your panels. Like in the first panel, we are looking straight at the figure, yet in the background, there's the lamp on the ceiling (frog perspective) and the corner of the wall going down at an angle. So in the end, there is a mix of two perspectives.

It's not a huge problem, since your comic has a consistent style by now. But I think it could be beneficial to you to look at perspective drawing methods (again).
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