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Habe eben eine lange Bildergeschichte fertig gestellt (24 Bilder) und gemerkt, dass dieses Bild zu viel des guten war (der Übergang vom schwarzen Bild zur gespenstischen Landschaft ist in der aktuellen Version eleganter):
http://klausgehrmann.net/transformation.htm
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| Frederick - 20.06.11 15:36
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Viele halten Pjer für ein Mädchen, die Figur ist bewusst feminin gehalten. Ich fürchte, das Truhenbild ist nicht zu retten. Ein schwieriger Stil, ich übe noch ...
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| wasserfarbe - 20.06.11 14:31
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Der kleine Junge? Da lag ich wohl ganz falsch, ich dachte immer, es wäre ein kleines Mädchen, mit blonden schulterlangen Haaren. Da sind für mich ein paar Zeichnungen, die sind sooo typisch Mädchen.
Ich habe einfach das Problem, dass die Truhe so massiv tintenschwarz ist und nicht buntstiftschwarz (oder eben braun). Danach ist sie aus der gleichen Perspektive plötzlich braun und hat die leichtere Farbgebung.
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| Frederick - 19.06.11 21:51
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@ wasserfarbe
Danke für dein fundiertes Feedback. Werde mal weitere Leser fragen, ob sie die Story mit Kopfschmerz besser finden ...
Vielleicht wäre die Truhe besser ganz schwarz, also inkl. Schloß?
btw: habe der Serie endlich einen Titel verpasst: "Space Tales." Siehe auch die überarbeitete Navigation / Layout: http://klausgehrmann.net (viele haben übersehen, dass der Junge auf dem Motorrad als Navigation dient, und haben deshalb trotz Gefallen immer nur eine Story gelesen).
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| wasserfarbe - 19.06.11 17:49
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Schade um das Bild, für mich illustriert es sehr deutlich die Kopfschmerzen, nachdem sie den Schlund runtergepurzelt ist. Jetzt sieht es in der Geschichte so aus, als wäre sie da gemütlich runtergegangen.
Warum hast Du die Truhe das erste Mal so massiv schwarz gemacht, das empfinde ich als einen ziemlichen Stilbruch.
Sonst gefällt mir die Geschichte wieder sehr gut.
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